Logan Huntze
8 May 2019
English 205
Ms. H
Project #3
For the
third and final project, I have decided to choose the project topic that talks
about theme and how it compares to the story and my life in general. I will be
discussing and comparing the book called “About the House Girl” to a theme I relate
to in my life. Patipir and Ifapi both use dedication in this story to better
their lives as well as reach each other in the end. If it wasn't for this
dedication, their lives would have been completely different. My life relates
to this because the dedication and hard work I put into each day of my life is
to reach a bigger goal and without this dedication my life and end goal would
be different than what it is now. Without dedication in each individual's life,
their goals and dreams for the future will not be accomplished.
Based on
the topic I have chosen and the thesis I have stated about themes, I have
decided to discuss dedication as the theme for “About the House Girl” as well
as my life. In the beginning of this story, we were introduced to Patipir as a
young man who lived alongside the river, and on his free time he enjoyed
hunting, fishing, and playing his flute on the side of the river. However, when
we were introduced to him it was clear that he was a responsible young boy who
worked hard for the things he had. Some of the first words we learned about
Patipir were, “He hunted and fished, he cut down trees and adzed and split the
wood for the sweat house or other building, he carved and burned out his own
canoe and made the long storage boxes to hold his accumulating treasure, he cut
and carried ceremonial wood for sweat house fires, and he sweated himself and
prayed.” This quote discusses all the hard work and dedication Patipir put into
each day of his life, and how he not only did things for himself but others
around him as well. This dedication continued throughout the story and Patipir
continued to be a successful young man.
Patipir
was never around woman, but a short way into the story he was introduced to a
girl who was special to him from day 1. He never actually met this girl until a
few times after encountering her, but she was all he wanted and her name was
Ifapi. Ifapi was a young girl who was also very responsible, but her life
consisted of things very different than Patipir’s. She was never outside, and
she was held inside her Aunt’s house most of her life. Patipir first
encountered Ifapi when he went to the “old ladies” house (Ifapi’s Aunt) to get
fresh seaweed. He saw Ifapi there in the house, and he fell in love at first
sight.
Days
went on where all Patipir could think about was Ifapi. He was determined and
dedicated to meet her and take her away to fall in love. Throughout the story,
Patipir did everything he could to get to her, and it finally paid off. After
the night Patipir and Ifapi saw each other at the dance party on the beach,
Patipir rushed back to the Aunt’s house to find Ifapi and take her away. He refused
to follow the Aunt’s orders to leave Ifapi alone, and as he explained his
situation and what he was going to do with her the Aunt accepted it and let him
take Ifapi away. All the hard work and dedication that Patipir had put into
finding and taking Ifapi away had finally come true, and he wasted no time to
marry her. That same day they went off and told Ifapi’s parents the situation
and then the two of them left on a canoe out to the sea to go off and start
their lives somewhere different with each other.
This
sounds cheesy, but Patipir truly was dedicated to get to Ifapi. When he was in
her Aunt’s house, he said “I am taking this little one with me, aunty.” These were
his last words to show that his goal and dream were accomplished and he had
finally reached Ifapi and had the opportunity to take her with him. I’ve talked
a lot about how Patipir was dedicated to find Ifapi, but in the end Ifapi was
very dedicated as well. She was at a point in her life where she felt
comfortable to go off with a man she had just met to start a new life. This
takes courage for a young woman, and also dedication. She was dedicated to go
off and start a life with a man she had fallen in love with and she was happy
to make her father proud. Both of these characters not only had dedication
throughout the story, but they continued it when they sailed off to the ocean
to start their new lives.
I can
relate this theme to my life because I have been dedicated in everything I have
done up until now in my life. It all started with sports and me being dedicated
to be the best player I could be. This dedication carried into my schooling and
future career choices that I have worked for to this day. My dedication with
sports paid off a ton in high school with baseball, and I ended my senior year
feeling like I was the best player I could have been. During high school, I made
my decision that I wanted to be a firefighter like my father, and my dedication
to get there started when I was 14 years old. I have continued that hard work
and dedication to achieve my career dream up until this day, and it has all
paid off. I recently was just offered a job as a firefighter at my dream Fire
Department which humbled me and made me understand that hard work and dedication
truly does pay off for whatever you are working towards.
My dedication
and end goal was very different than Patipir and Ifapi, but it ultimatlely
proves the same point. With hard work and dedication towards something you
want, it can always be achieved. Patipir’s dedication to get to Ifapi and marry
her came true, and Ifapi’s dedication to find the right man and live a good
life also came true. My hard work and dedication paid off for me as well, so in
the end the main point I took away from this was no matter what the situation
is or the goal is you want to accomplish, it can always happen with dedication.
Hi Logan!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your project. I really liked the different view you used with this story, “About the House Girl,”. I agree Patipir and Ifapi had dedication for what they wanted and would not let anything get in their way. Ifapi decided many years before that she wanted to be with the flute player, so she stayed away from other men and pretended she was sick so she would not be tempted by anyother man. That is truly dedication. Congratulations on the job offer, it is very good that you have had the dedication since you were very young. Not everyone has that, which can cause a person to get in trouble and be lost until they find what they want to dedicate themselves to. Do you think you parents and the way they parented you help you stay so dedicated? Good luck to you with your new career.
Hi Logan. First of all, I did not know we could use the book we have been using all along for the 3rd project. I enjoyed reading your project, but what if you used more quotes in your writing. I think that you summarized a lot of the story, "About the House Girl" I think you did a great job on explaining how dedication is in the story as well as in your own life. I think it is great that you were offered a job as a fire fighter, since that is what you have worked so hard for. I did not know that Ifapi had a goal of finding the right man to marry. Is there a quote you can find to support that? I think it is kind of crazy that Ifapi left with a guy she barely knew. That is very risky and especially because she is a female, I would think she should have been more cautious. But I think Ifapi's family already knew of Patapir and his family. So, if anything happened to her or she went missing they could hunt him down. Thanks for sharing and good luck in your career.
ReplyDeleteHi, Logan!
ReplyDeleteOkay, let me start it saying congratulations! I remember reading your introduction at the beginning of the semester and you've said your main goal was to become a firefighter. And now, less than 6 months later, you already are one (I'm assuming that you accepted the job offer)! Achieving a goal is like a dream becoming true, so I bet you are overjoyed!
Talking about the project now: I found it interesting your ideas and how you linked the theme "dedication" to your life. I liked how passionate you were when writing about your personal dedication; however, I feel that you did not explore the theme in the story. It seems that you summarized a lot the plot instead of analyzing deeper the theme. Also, the 3rd paragraph seemed kinda lost there so I would suggest you blend it together with the 4th paragraph. Another thing that I would recommend you to put textual evidence. You summarized a lot the text and put only two quotes, and they didn't have any citation.
I hope you will find it helpful somehow.